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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Terrible

Spelling, grammar, wrong uses of words... I couldn't get through the whole thing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Illiterate

One of the most illiterate stories, that I have tried to read. I got past "Done quit well" and "I,ve", but "donated two million doors" got me to stop.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Is English your first language?

Just saying...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Oh Dear!

Oh dear, what a mess! It looks as if English is not your first language; all the more reason to have somebody (a proof reader) to go through it for you. M222RJR.

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