All Comments on 'Mistaken Identity'

It would be great if you wrote a second part to this story. In which he finds out that he made a mistake and that she's not a prostitute, Maybe he cant forget her(wonders why she left the money) and wants to get back together with her and she makes him suffer a bit before that.

Very nice and want more!

Well written, now what about a sequel?

Some thoughts to set your creative juices running:

Scenario 1) She could be travelling on business to a foreign land, it's a busy city ... it's raining, a stranger offers to share a cab to a hotel, they both get in, he takes off his hat and ... well you're the author

Scenario 2) Curiosity gets the better of her, she returns to the apartment ... disguised a cleaner ... and finds his business card under the bed.

Scenario 3) She finds a spec of his bodily fluid, has the DNA checked out and finds out he is an alien ... no, sorry wrong sort of story ... and traces him through medical records.

Scenario 4) None of the above

I like your style, a continuation of this story would be very welcome, to the point with no frills, give me more please, and don't forget to read and vote on mine too...lol your comments would be nice too xx

Peter