All Comments on 'Mistress Chronicles Ch. 01'

Many women can learn effective training methods from this story. It is important to bring out desire in men.

If this is what you could do when you were only a novice, it's like seeing Godzilla in action when he was "only" 40 feet tall and not yet at full height. The gratification you gain by sapping power is palpable and your enjoyment of the harnessing of the submissive is what gives the account its electricity.

If Mistress M is this good writing fact, I can barely imagine how sensational she would be ensnaring us with fiction, and I truly hope that some day we will find out. For now she is keeping us totally enthralled with her own true 'adventures'. I can only humbly say thank you, as we yearn for more.

Erotic and sexy your brain could break any mortal man!

Superb bit of storytelling. This is a very familiar place, told with a fresh voice. (At least for me, as this is my first story from this writer.) Perspectives are conveyed very efficiently and effectively. I think this is a very hot first chapter and it definitely makes you anxious for part 2.