All Comments on 'Mmm... Good Afternoon Sex'

This is pretty good stuff. I'm not sure I like the whole no-dialogue thing, but I understand that you chose to write it that way, and did a pretty good job of it.

Nice.

Hi Sarah, You did a great job! This was an awesome story.

I have no idea whether this was an experiment with alternative style, or is your style of choice. Either way, it's well done.

Too many readers don't know about the potential for spreading disease by fecal matter contact.