by mwm69writer
can't wait for the next part of the story.... it would be very erotic to be in her position
Would have liked the guys to have names instead of numbers. Also would have liked to have seen Jan have some orgasms. Hopefully the four guys will continue to fuck Jan all night long, and hopefully she will want to continue to fuck them long after the night is over.
The lack of names of the individuals whom the husband apparently knows makes the story a bit impersonal. Also there are a few areas where the wording just does not fit well. Decent attempt but it may pay to have an editor or somebody else review the story next time...
Absolutely first rate! I get immense pleasure in watching Sue, my girlfriend (34gg tits!) get fucked hard by a group of well hung studs - it's even better if one or more are black. Funny isn't it? I've never heard Sue complain about the amount of cock she gets! She's such a greedy bitch, a bit like Jan in the story! Ken