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All Comments on 'Moans of Frustration'

by Su86

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Callie8Callie8over 15 years ago
Not bad...

The story was enjoyable... good job for your first submit. A little more description (sounds, touches, etc) would have really helped... I did enjoy it though, good luck!

lowkeyonelowkeyonealmost 2 years ago

Good for a first attempt. I am no expert but I reckon the overall story lacks feeling.

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