All Comments on 'Model Behaviour Ch. 01'

Nice set up.

I liked your start for this story. Hope you do not keep us waiting too long for more.

Please, we have got to have more. You have really pulled me into the story.

Very likeable people in a believable scenario. Well written piece that flows very well. The reader gets the sense of embarrassment Simon and Megan feel.

Well written. A potential erotic masterpiece!

There is so much more to go, so keep at it!

Not too much of a waste of time.

Another reader expressed it well: "Very likeable people in a believable scenario."

Considering certain of the vitriolic attacks I've suffered in the past couple of years (usually in response to what I considered a constructive critique of someone else's story), "not too much of a waste of time" is relatively kind.<br>

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Thanks to everyone who posted here or over on my other story. I've already started work on follow-ups, and more material. Sorry to have kept you all waiting.

Love the situation. Excellent story.

Do like your style of titillation with out the standard pverdone descriptions of so many other submitters.

oops.....I don't read instructions so good.

I especially like the part at the end where the girl kisses the boy on the cheek. She is being so naughty kissing him like that. I can picture the boy instantly having a huge hard-on just when he is about to enter the classroom. I mean, he is really big! His cock would be standing up at almost a ninety degree angle. The girl starts to giggle. She says, "Sorry. I didn't mean to cause you to get you so excited!" Whether or not he walks out into the classroom with his cock erect like that is questionable. I know that, if it were me, I would need to settle down first.

I thought this was going to be a good story with a believable scenario but I was disappointed it ended so soon. The writing style is good, and talented. Perhaps when you have time you could do chapter 2?

It sort of dies at the end! And I was expecting a second page number to be there! Great start!