by dididothat
Well, it's not that bad... You can continue :D
Just kidding, I really liked it. Just that those short parts are a little disappointing. If you could make them a little longer, I would like that.
But do as you please, just give us more :)
Another nice comment. This is a serious, yet amusing story. Loved it. Very arousing and clever....loved the 'did you look forward to this?' question...that is exactly what i would have asked...
Sir...I'd like some more! Haha...definitely gotta write more.
It is okay, I get off on it. So please ...
love VvV