All Comments on 'Mollie from Montana'

Only a couple very minor glitches. Mainly typos and you referred to both parts of an 18-wheeler as the trailer. Minor distractions from an excellent story for a nit-picker like me. Please continue.

You're off to a great start. There were a couple of minor word errors that a spell checker wouldn't catch, but a decent editor would have. I find it impossible to catch similar errors in my own writing, but am lucky to have a business partner who can spot misused words in a single pass. Availing yourself of the services of an editor would enhance the quality of the presentation. Your creativity needs no help.

I have a short list of authors whose every submission I anticipate enjoying, and you are on it.

This is going to be a wild ride. Already had a number of chuckles with the dialog and if this is an indicator of what's to come I look forward to the following releases.

Great "tongue in cheek approach".

Mollie from Montana can represent me any day of the week.

Boyd

I liked this new start of yours, hope for followups soon, though.

I rarely Lit nowadays as a few things bothered me.

All the best

John

Some of the dialogue seems a little stiff, but we'll see how things proceed. A little more detail would have been nice.

An acerbic wit, an excellent wordsmith and a nearly perfect grammarian. Add those attributes to someone with a talent for strory craftsmanship and the result is this enthralling tale.

Thank you, Mr. Grigor

de Jay

Seems to be a well written for a story about ones life's happenings though we will have to see where it leads from here to make any final judgement.