All Comments on 'Molly and Her Sisters'

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Billydee2Billydee2about 16 years ago
Good Story

Now you need to write one where 1 guy submits to his base desires and accepts all three

Risq_001Risq_001about 16 years ago
Simlar theme to the other story, but...

<p>I liked your take on it. (^_^)</p>

<p>I was thinking when I read the other story, how would the other husband feel if they weren't the one that was choosen by the sisters. Your take went pretty much like I thought I might have felt if that had happened to me and I was 2nd best to the triplets.</p>

<p>I liked this submission. It was funny and insightfull</p>

-Risq

MetzovMetzovabout 16 years ago
Consent

When did he consent to have sex with Molly's sisters? If the sex's had been reversed I think there would have been a very good case for rape charges to be brought.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
great story

Ohio, your stories are the best,keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
A good story but..

..even as you acknowledge that you were inspired "Triple Trouble" I found this matching that story too much. It was still a good read but followed the formula.

BigFtHunterBigFtHunterabout 16 years ago
Another great one Ohio

Ohio, a couple of you guys write some really good stuff. I always love it when a story shows up with one of your names one it. Thanks for posting. Great story. Enjoyed.

cloacascloacasabout 16 years ago
Good story

Your version is neater and more internally consistent.

You came a little closer to my take on this story idea, that the sisters' behavior is just plain sick. Not sick as in icky but sick as in deranged or sociopathic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Different take - I liked it

A good variation on the original story. The circumstances have enough differences to warrant the changed reaction of the wronged husband.

JakeRiversJakeRiversabout 16 years ago
I'll go along with Cloacas -

this version holds together much better.

I particularly liked the way Ted handled it.

Nicely done, Jack

JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969about 16 years ago
Much better!

Much better than the original!

cageyteecageyteeabout 16 years ago
Congratulations!

Not only on a fine story but also on the approach you took! I appreciate that you took an idea from curious2c and made your own story out of it! In my mind, a story neither better nor worse, but MOST importantly, DIFFERENT! We are fast running out of original ideas. I have been in a slump for months and have been unable to come up with something new and different. Following your example, I may be able to come up with something different without a "new" theme. I'll give it a try! In the meantime, congratulations again!

GenghisKhanGenghisKhanabout 16 years ago
Not sure how "serious" the story was

taken as a semi tongue in cheek, I guess it was okay. <p>

Seriously?, not too beleivable, the narrator's serious tone and severing-to-the-point nature notwithstanding. I like him well enough as a character.... just not the way he went round about telling us. <p>

Unfortunately, Molly, Hannah, and Amy were nothing more than cardboard box; no depth, no serious feelings, no serious ambivalence; no serious sense of loss. If the author had given Molly one more line beyond waht she said about them having always shared since high school, by saying somethin in the nature of [in a loss, pitiful, and longingly perturbed way]: <p>

"We didn't know when to leave our childhood behind, despite our age, you see. All these stupidity, in our part --- and it must have been, not seem but it must have been EVIL to you, the wronged party --- were done simply because we didn't know,,, because we were not intelligent and/or mature enough to leave our silly girlie acts behind... I know I realized that fact too late... I have hurt someone I have come to love too deeply. <p>

"I know I have hurt you beyond repair.... but I can not, in my heart of heart, give up. I know you have given up on me; but I must give myself hope, and my hope is, short of being more psychotic, I will work endlessly to win you back.... Ultimately it may be in vain; but I won't know for sure unless I truly grow up and grow up quick, and try to find my way back to you, would I?" <p>

Something of that nature ----- if nothing else, to indicate that despite their seemingly evil nature, Molly, if not the other two sister, DOES feel hurt, does know hurt, does suffer, even it's self-inflicted. That would indicate that, yes, somethings, sometimes, are "black and white," but even then, black and white may last, sometimes only fleetingly, too... and what came before and what comes after, are of different colors, of different shades of grey....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Good read

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great

I particularly liked the husband who moved away and gave the wife the choice of moving or staying. Actually, what the three husbands could have done a tattoo of a M, H or A put on the cheek of their ass.

Boyd

Harryin VAHarryin VAabout 16 years ago
Your version shows that Curious2c is Moron

You got it right. Curious2c did not. This is why I have said many times that Curosu2c is a good writer but sucks Moose cock when it comes to writing a story.

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I have trouble with Ohio/s set up. After several years he has to have a knock down drag out fight to be able to spend 1 week along with his wife?

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Also the implication of Arnie getting sex 7 days a week I almost missed. Well done.

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In the Curious2c story <u>TRIPLE TROUBLE </u> the author sets up the premise... that husband cannot tell the 3 cunts / whores apart. And even in BIG confrontation scene even when his supposed "wife" shows up he has No way of knowing which sister is which... and all 3 STILL tease and humilate him while he is packing up and talking divorce.

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Then for NO reason they decide to reconcile... but the husband in TRIPLE TROUBLE <b>STILL</b> cant tell them apart!! <b> NOTHING actually changes between the husband of the 3 sisters at the end </b> of curious2c wretched idiotic story.

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This flaw shows up in MOST of curious2c stories. He sets up a premise and conflict then IGNORES it as he brings the story to the end....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Very nice.

Well done. Correct response to the three sisters.

Alvaron53Alvaron53about 16 years ago
The premise is not credible

I didn't buy the premise in curious2c's original nor do I buy it here. To think that all three identical twins remain completely identical over decades of their lives such that no one can differentiate them is silly. Small nicks, scars and imperfections will serve to tell them apart.

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If you suspend disbelief, the storytelling is good but that initial hill is just too tall.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Wasnt going to comment but, one critiquer

indicated the three sister were cardboard cutouts with no depth of character. That is actually very false. The girls showed more of their character in the story than necessary. They felt they could do anything to anyone. That came out in the story of them in school and taking each others place to do well on grades, tricking their parents, and switching with boyfiends. They felt they had the world in their hands and could do no wrong. Their egos were so large and everything was self indulgent for their own gratification. Other people were but pawns to be moved around the board. Oyr main character of the story did little to punish his wife. Ted did better by forcing her to show her real self in making a decision to be with him, whom she professed to love, or her sisters. Arnie started the story weak but later turned into a royal asshole. The black ink trick was cute but if he had used the waterproof markers in three colors he would have had a bit more information to deal with. Personally I would have used the dinner at the restaurant to say I put a black mark on you Friday night that isnt there now how do you explain that and then asked he of the other husbands to check their "wives" for the mark. I was going to say the three women werent whores but then again I guess they were, fucking all three men for home and lifestyle. A whore after all doesnt have to take money barter is good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Prior Fluff vs This Semi-Serious Reality

Each required some suspension of close scrutiny but this was closer to what life would deal.<P>

To think that anyone could knowingly go with the flow indicates that he doesn't really care about being taken advantage of. The signal there is silly - OK but how could anyone who respected them self get by the long term selfish disrespect by their contracted partner???<P>

Suspended belief in this situation of either flavor isn't swallow-able pride-wise.<P>

Author - you are appreciated and looked forward to.<P>

With Very High Regard

Orion623Orion623about 16 years ago
Enjoyed the story

The premise is a little hard to swallow but once you are by that the story is a good read. It was enjoyable to watch Scott work his way through the problem and to resolve it via divorce.

Another commenter mentioned scars, nicks and other assaults to the skin which could give away the individual identities of the 3 women. Vaccination marks would be another useful way of differentiating them as it is unlikely that all 3 would develop a scar that looks the same or is in the exact same spot as the other sisters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
This was a great story.

If you have dated identical twins, which I have, they can be a handful and a trick like this was played on me. However; it never went this far because the sisters confessed before we left their parents house. I was luck that I did not marry either one because the work got out that they they were nothing but cheating sluts. Again, I loved the story and the ending was great all except for Arnie's decision. How he could live his life with a cheating slut whore is beyond me.

bruce22bruce22about 16 years ago
Great Writing

and interesting restructuring of the original plot.

Suspending one's sense of reality is necessary talent

for enjoying other people's stories. Some folks are never

going to enjoy what the site has to offer and you are one of

the best!

Bruce

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Nicely handled

Thanks for another good read. PAPATOAD

angiquesophieangiquesophieabout 16 years ago
better

nice story...better than the original, which was

far too complicated. i guess it still is a bit far fetched

with the identical triplets and all. but it was

very entertaining. thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
No Revenge

If Molly had benn off BC for close to a yr and fuck 3 guys, im surpised she not already preggers. The best would have been if she had been preg. and he overheard thier conv. he confonts them makes molly get a tatto "scott's pussy" then dumped hur and the kid not be scott's.

gatorhermitgatorhermitabout 16 years ago
Great Story Until the End

I really liked the character development and pacing of the story until the last few paragraphs - it seemed like the Author had an alarm go off and had to finish it in 2 minutes. Perhaps he's setting us up for a second chapter, although upon re-reading, that doesn't seem to be the case either. <p>In terms of content, I think Scott's actions (i.e. moving on and probably upgrading) at the end make sense, and I think the portrayal of Molly as not having a clue (pretty but gullible, a little selfish, and naive) also make sense.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Clever original story from curious2c and Ohio

Very clever, innovative tory by Ohio who always writes well. The only minor flaw, in my opinion,was the doctor visit to check his sperm count. He and Molly had been trying for 10 months to get pregnant and she insisted he go to doctor and get his sperm checked. When he gets good report he rushes home but ends up talking about politics at dinner and it is only when he is in bed that he remembers good news and goes down to tell Molly and eavedrops to hear about the switching that destroys his marriage. Fine story but how can you get great news like that and forget to tell Molly all through dinner? The fantasy triplets I can buy, but that flaw irritated me.

60 year old George

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
So George

That one little item causes you to give the story a 50. Well at least you are consistent in always disliking the husband characters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
very good story

I really enjoyed this story, although the ending seemed hurried, and I feel that Ohio with his experience in writing ability could have done a better job on the ending. The ending left me with a feeling of sometimes missing after all of the detailed story text that I read. Isn't there another story in this website (the only one I read on mature subjects) about triples and their exchanging husbands for different nights? RAG

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Engaging

I haven't read too many Loving Wives stories, but I found myself completely engaged with this one. You did a great job with the characters and the story, and although it was sometimes uncomfortable to imagine the emotional toll the events might have caused, I thought you did a great job with having Scott and the others move on as well. Nicely done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Original vs New Version of story

First let me say I liked the originsl version better than this one. It is not because the orignal version was better written but becuase the wife Molly had forgotten that not only was she suppose to love her husband but needed to respect him and to me that is what happened to her, she lost respect foe him and let the other man's sex become more important to her.

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Another difference in the stories was the in your face attitude this group of sisters had. In the original version the sisters seemed to have never grownup when it came to relationships in this version the sisters seemed cold and calculating until they were caught.

------------------------------------------------------------The one thing about the story that I do not understand is- If the sisters had any idea that one of the husbands had an idea about what was going on why would they continue? The only explanation can think of they were brain dead. If it was not for that problem with the story I would give it a 100, but once the husband asked a couple of questions that the sister knew was not true or had not happened and were actually worried about it would they or any oyher intelligent adult continue doing what they were doing? They were most likly in there 30's and it just did not make sense to me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Very clever story

I usually don't like loving wives stories where the husband exacts retribution on the wife: whatever excitement the story brings just turns sour This one was an exception, however, chiefly because it was so well written. So well that the denouement seemed inevitable, otherwise it would have rung false.

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
Emotionally illiterate...

I remember this expression from one of Bergman's films. It seems to fit here so well. Some people ARE shallow, egocentric and until forced (by similar crises as we've seen in the story), may not mature beyond the emotional level they were at while in their teens. <P>

As ALVARON and others have mentioned, while I had to work a bit on suspending disbelief with the premise of the indistinguishable appearances, still it did not get too much in the way, especially as you used as you put it: 'cloak and dagger' to overcome the sisters' vain sense of invulnerability. <P>

My only "complaint”: not enough stories coming at us more frequently...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Pregnant?

If ONE of the sisters was trying to get pregnant, what would have happened if she was successful? Don't you think that trading spouses would have become increasingly difficult, if one sister was pregnant and the other two wern't?! And, I simply can't believe that all 3 sisters could manage to get pregnant at the same time - after all, one had been trying for "10 months".

ProfWriterProfWriteralmost 16 years ago
Loved it - great ending!!

I used to try and deflect some of the more immature and self-serving comments made by HARRY and Alvaron and their ilk, but it only served to draw attention to them. I refuse to give their invalid critiques and annoying prognostications any more credibility.

Good authors, such as ohio, know enough to ignore them without me pointing them out.

Thanks-I enjoyed it,

PW

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Realistic

Full of twist and turns, and the men stand up for themselves, lets face it that's lacking in some stories in this catagory, and i would like to say this is the way most real life infidelity stories end.I mean in real life how much can you stomach before you know, there's no way to forget or forgive.

Simple49erSimple49erover 15 years ago
Marevellously Complicated!

Cheating time three! That is too much fun to believe. Three times the selfishness, three times everything that is bac about cheating and all on a schedule: wonder if they used an excel spread sheet to keep track: and they could have thrown in boxes for how good it was, what was done, and given a prize at the end of the year. I know this is a fantasy, but what is scary is that what woman (man) can imagine, woman can do. I will never look at twins and triplets in the same way, regardless how sexy and beautiful the group looks. Maybe we should share this story with friends who date them? Great fun!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
The only glitch I see.

Is the attempt at pregnancy and birth control. If Molly & Scott had been trying the last year what did Molly do with Arnie or Ted on their night to prevent pregnancy.

Ted&Amy Arnie&Hannah

Vulcan_in_OhioVulcan_in_Ohioalmost 15 years ago
Last reader asked a good question . . .

I enjoyed this version just as much as the other. The last reader asked how the birth control might work for the woman trying to get pregnant; she (? Molly) was trying to get pregnant with Scott, her husband. None of the men used condoms, and there is no male "pill," at least not yet. So how would Mollie avoid getting knocked up with Ted's or Arnie's little swimmers? Douching right after sex would not be fully effective. It would also be suspicious. Putting a spermicide into her pussy would give it an awful and weird taste, and that would raise questions for the other men. She can't take B.C. pills for just the nights with the non-husbands. They either work for a whole month, or they don't work at all. I suppose she could time her sex with Scott for the most fertile time of her cycle, but that's not a sure thing and again, it would make him wonder. So this is a bit of a flaw in the story. On the other hand, the three sisters seem so dumb it's possible they did not consider this "flaw" either! Really enjoyed the story and I agree that Scott did the correct thing -- he quit the marriage and good riddance. I think he could have told their parents and maybe put an add on a billboard had he wanted a bit of revenge -- of course, that would have embarrassed him as well.

MelloYellowMelloYellowalmost 15 years ago
Thanks,

Fun story for this genre. Molly could have used a diaphragm unbeknown to the other husbands.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
loved it!

because he didnt puss out like the guy from the curious2c story. he got rid of that bitch, because lets face, the amount of ppl out there that want to swap, have open marriages, whatever, is pretty small. way to man up ohio.

mememe621mememe621over 14 years ago
Very well done

This is an excellent story--well written and very vivid. It's pretty clear where things are headed all along, but you really grab the reader's attention and make us want to see how things play out in the end.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
To anon "so George" 08/02/08

In my comment a year or two ago i mentioned a minor flaw in thi story. the idiot anon on 08/02/09, translated that into a fifty. To bad aon did not have a brain . A minor flaw does not reduce the score by 50%, I see why writers don'tlike anons. So many of us are totsl idiots.

60 year old George

robinhodrobinhodover 13 years ago
Telling them apart

Alvaron53 is right. There is no way they could fool a husband. In my primary school, aged 7 to 11, our class featured in a national newspaper because of the extraordinarily high number of twins. Not all were identical of course but we did have four sets of identical twins which was pretty remarkable. The teachers all consistently joked about the difficulty of telling them apart. My point here is that us kids not only didn't have any such difficulty, we couldn't understand what the teachers were banging on about. That was before the onset of the inevitable pimples and scars. Still a good read though - I view it like the best science fiction, where you are required to make one leap of belief, after which the logic flows.

My only problem is that this story, like so many others, is unconvincing in the easy, smooth way the wronged husband slips into a new relationship. I'm lucky in having a very happy marriage and don't even consider any possibility of a split. The only way of parting will be a death. If I lose my wife I cannot conceive of replacing her. I suppose that view could be modified in time, but it would be a very long time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Decent story - routine ending

I don't think Scott should have bailed quite so fast. He had the sisters at his mercy. He should have arranged them in a circle and had them give each other a hard spanking. Then he should have had them fulfil all his sexual fantasies over as long a period as it took for Scott to feel that they had been sufficiently punished. And finally, made babies with Molly - after all, she did love him in her own way. Of course, the sisters would either had to have different hairstyles or have their names tattooed somewhere appropriate.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great Story

I think this is the first story I've ever finished here!

DefluerDeflueralmost 13 years ago
Kept me reading

This was one of those "Sex Stories" that isn't really a sex story at all. PG-13 at the worst, I could have used more action but at the same time its one of those stories where I couldn't even begin to think of how to add it in there without breaking the story altogether.

As far as the idea that a husband should be able to identify his wife after years of marriage, is certainly a problem. A flaw? No, we suspend so many bits of reality in sex stories (everyone is almost always hot and the sexiest unless they are to be humiliated or the antagonist, to name a major one.) so that didn't bother me to much.

Good writing, it kept me interested and reading, even without the sex that I actually wanted. I could have actually used a little revenge, sexual or otherwise, but telling the other husbands was appropriate enough.

DWornockDWornockalmost 13 years ago
It's such an original story

I had to rate it 5*****s. Plus it is well written too.

FD45FD45almost 13 years ago
This is one of two triplet stories in Loving Wives

Yours and curious2c.

Your's is more realistic. The fact that all three had husbands made more sense if they were inclined to marriage.

However...as many twin studies have shown, they tend to marry similar mates, even if seperated. So Arnie was a bit of a misnomer.

Still, I liked your take on it. It was an easy read, was interesting and thoughtful.

Even if you don't know how to capitalize.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
BEEN THERE DONE THAT

THIS TIME IN TRIPLICATE, EGO COMMUNICATION IS HARD LOVE. TK U MLJ LV NV

Huedogg2Huedogg2over 12 years ago
i think it's a great story

The other two husbands are fucking morons.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
You're the best

I have enjoyed every one of your stories. They are poignant, insightful, and very entertaining to read. I hope that you will continue your contributions to Literotica with another of your passionate, fiery, plots soon.

Thank you for this story.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveabout 12 years ago
Three on Three

Look, if they wanted to have fun with each others husband that's fine, providing the husbands were in on it. That wasn't the case, however and the three girls lost out. Not true, one was still happy but she had to change her look so Arnie could tell them apart. One more thing:

I HATE CHEATIN WIVES

as Scott said

FUCK HER, FUCK ALL THREE OF THEM

HA HA HA

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Judas

the buggered cornhole, the meaty cock is smoked, betrayed!

chytownchytownalmost 12 years ago
Good Read.***

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Just had a second read after quite awhile

I think Ohio wrote this story tongue in cheek, I thinik he created people in his story that were more charactures than intended to be like real people. Of course the main plot line is simply ridiculous plus how could the sisters not realize their behavior particularly when married was cruel and hurtful. How in reality could Molly restrict her husband to mercy fucks all the while she and her sister banged Arnie everyday in whatever way he wanted ? Then she tops off her sluttishess behavior by plotting to get Ted to impregnate her and pass it off as her husband's baby. What started as a game for the sisters in high school became a heinous cruel stutty lifestyle later during ther so called 'wedded bliss". Steve's reaction was quick, just and decisive and for the sisters well deserved.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
I gave it 5 stars ...

... very believable I was once married to a bitch who would hurt me and others if she thought she could get away with it.

cliffhanger20cliffhanger20over 11 years ago
NOW I AIN'T NO EINSTEIN BUT WE ARE TALKING REALLY STUPID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's a classic case of call a tow truck so they could all get their heads pulled out of asses!!!!!!!!!!!! But it was well written.

cantbuymycantbuymyover 11 years ago
ok

this one was not a cucky story, at least two of them had balls.

ythebadgerythebadgerover 11 years ago
Well written

Implausible and amusing.

karan9876karan9876over 11 years ago
Finally an ohio story that is not a cuck story.

For a moment i had to check the authors name because i could not believe it was written by ohio as the men were not wimps. Finally a good story from ohio that aint full of cuck shit. 5 star rating.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
another display of ignorance....

... from the inimitable Karan, who apparently has not read enough of Ohio's stories to discover that they very often end in divorce. Of course, Karan just comes here to read about women getting what they deserve so any reconciliation story, no matter how thoughtful, is a "cuck story" to him.

john8u2john8u2over 11 years ago
Agree with the most others....

I came into this story expecting something quite different than what I got (I mean a story about sex with three sisters...what warm blooded male could pass THAT up?). To be honest, I almost stopped reading once the premise was laid out, but I have to say that I was very pleasantly surprised. FOR ONCE the guy came out on top instead of winding up an unwilling cuck or the slave of three women as is so typical in these stories! Great writing that pulled you in and made you feel for the guy. Five stars and Favorited!

AdjectiveNounVerbAdjectiveNounVerbover 11 years ago
Good setup.

How do Molly and her sisters interact with each other after this? I think this story sets up a very interesting scenario for a non-erotic story addressing the aftermath for the three sisters. Is it finger-pointing all around and nobody talks to each other any more? Does Molly ever "get it"? What's she tell her next man about her ex-husband, herself, and her sisters? What's Amy decide to do, and if it's go to Chicago with him do they succeed? How long can Hannah keep her mouth and legs shut?

Scott's story is a finished story, but I think it provides the set-up to some other stories I'd like to read.

LostchanceLostchanceover 11 years ago
More info...

Would have been a good line and revenge for the poor guy if he let molly know that the reason the 3 sisters were not pregnant was because they were swapping husbands. 90 to 95% of men's sperm are meant to seek and destroy other men's sperm. Would have crushed the cheating wives hearts.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
A little tattoo

Would be a good way to sort these girls out. Somewhere you can see it easily when getting into bed

cantbuymycantbuymyalmost 11 years ago

This was a great story. How can Molly ever say she loves her husband when she is fucking Arnie at least twice a week and Scott was only getting fucked twice a week and then it was not always his own wife? Molly was also fucking Ted too so that means she was getting fucked four times a week by someone else so hubby maybe got it once. No wonder she was not getting pregnant by Scott. First it was not hot dirty nasty cheating cunt sex so she was just going through the motions and not getting into the ‘make me pregnant’ sex with her own husband. Scott is lucky she did not get pregnant by him.

But the grounds should have been adultery/infidelity and he should have listed the husbands and the wives as co-respondents. That way it would be out there and then post the damn court proceedings on the net. No since in letting them all keep it hidden. He should also post the conference tape, including the one he should have made of their last conversation.

Even super stud Arnie would have to dump the cunt because everyone would know other men were fucking his wife.

And fuck a tattoo, who gives a fucking shit now?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
rape

He could use the recording of their confessions to sue the other two sisters for sexual assault. Last I knew having sex with someone without their consent was rape.

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333over 10 years ago
Loved it

But it was the most uncharacteristically Ohio story I have read from you. Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Last Chance

I think that once he discovered what the sisters were up to that he could have salvaged the relationship except for one more and very hurtful fact - Molly wanted Ted to impregnate her...OVER!

He really loved her and she did love him and they might have worked it out with tattoo's, hair color and/or length and worked to getting their life back together.

I actually felt sorry for Molly, seems as though she wasn't initially really into the game and somewhat reluctant; however, years of their games and sisterly blood...well, too bad!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Haven't read all the comments but...

There's no guarantee he WAS having sex with more than one of them... if generally the "sex" he was having was him performing oral then it's probable the only actual "twice a week" sex would have been solely with his wife...

That being said, clearly the women were more interested in their pleasure and games than in any potential injury to their spouses if they were ever found out... or they were still confident in their "skills" that they never figured they would get caught - and how stupid is that of them realistically...? To not think that EVENTUALLY a spouse might not figure it out - after all, what if only ONE of them got pregnant...? or had twins...? or broke something or etc, etc, etc...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Hope he used the recording and got most of the assets.

Fraud would have been easy to prove. Might have been able to get the whole marriage annulled. This did seem very familiar to another story. One had triplets that were sharing the same as these three. The other had a set of twins that were sharing one man and driving him crazy. Good stories but in the end I was hoping that all three were burnt down to the ground and that's not how it turned out. BAH!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
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At least in this story, the man FINALLY got to be a man. No BULLSHIT from the cheating slut . I love your writing BUT this is the first story I've read where the man didn't wimp out. This story was FINALLY satisfying.

Tootight1Tootight1over 9 years ago
nice story

nice writing, always thought about twins, but not trips.

KarenEKarenEover 9 years ago
Ted

I LOVE Ted's solution!

FD45FD45over 9 years ago
Was rereading this

And for some reason, I wondered 'How would JPB write this?'

Why do I get the impression that JPB would have the protagonist be just dandy with this kind of situation? I am not calling him a MM clone. Just, a lot of Bob's characters are just fine with sexual shenanigans which most 'normal' folks (whatever that means) would not.

Still enjoy the story. Wish heartily it was longer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I really wish

There was more to this. Just seems like it has potential. Well that, and I want to see Molly's life properly deteriorate.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
good story

much better than curious 2cs version

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
YUCK!

Now these are some nasty, unsanitary women. Its like me wearing my sisters used panties! Disgusting. I would demand a HIV,STD test before anything else with anyone else. Good thing he left that skank! Ugh! just creepy nasty.

Eroticafan8000Eroticafan8000over 8 years ago
Loved it!

If I had found out that they were switching on me with my bros-in-law, I'd be pissed. If there were even the slightest chance of me taking the wife back, I'd either make my wife get some sort of mark or tattoo on her hands or face or move to the other side of the states and drag her ass with me, separating her from the other two harpies. Most likely though, I'd get the hell away from those bitches. That kind of shit is low. Makes you paranoid about twins.

sbrooks103sbrooks103over 8 years ago
Why Are So Many Of These Women So Spineless?

"It wasn't her fault, Scott. Amy and I insisted." – Why, what would you have done if she said NO?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Brilliant and heart breaking

Congrats. Wow, brilliant and heart breaking. Five out of five. This was like Christmas. I love Ohio stories and I thought I'd read them all. Then one day I noticed this one and, like all the others, it was amazing. Fast paced and with great dialogue.

I know the plot is loosely based on another author's plot so I guess Ohio shouldn't get all the credit. But I found it ingenious. I loved how the main character reacted when he found out and played the sisters off against each other for a little revenge.

In RL such deception might be forgiveable except for the bit about letting Ted get her pregnant and saying Arnie is the better lover. Clearly the three sisters thought of the three men as an interchangable unit. And after all, he did get to sleep with the other two sisters. (Although his point is very true that he didn't know it.) But the pregnancy thing was beyond the pale.

Like other commentors have observed we do need some explanation about whether Molly was using a diahram with the other two husbands while trying to get pregnant with Scott. I think we must assume she was. A minor edit would fix that.

Also I liked the endings for Amy and Hannah, but we never found out what happened to Molly. This needs a sequel or at least an additional postscript.

Now I must go and carefully double check that I haven't missed any other Ohio stories. Cheers Steve

sbrooks103sbrooks103over 8 years ago
Ted & Amy

If he DID stay with Molly, it should have been the same as Ted and Amy - move away with him and work on their marriage or stay there with her sisters.

Tootight1Tootight1about 8 years ago
good story

I haven't known many twins in my life time, but imagine this happens more than not. An interesting story to be sure. the set up was nicely done, nicely told, and wrapped up.

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333about 8 years ago
Second time through....

Still five stars. Still love it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Not plausible but a fun read

You can always tell twins apart once you get to know them. There are physical differences, just subtle ones.

sbrooks103sbrooks103about 8 years ago
Further Thoughts

"It was...just a silly game, Scott” – Was it just a “silly game” when they plotted to have Ted get Molly pregnant?

One thing that confuses me – When Molly was off on her “one or two” nights screwing Arnie, why didn’t Amy or Hannah screw Scott?

And as Scott said, the sisters had the fun of sleeping with other men, but they guys didn't, since they THOUGHT they were fucking their wives.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xalmost 8 years ago
@Anonymous 04/18/16 Re: "Not plausible but a fun read"

I will have to take your word on the subtle differences between twins/triplets, but there are a couple of things you're over-looking -

1) He wasn't looking for differences, he assumed that "Molly" was Molly, and had no reason to look for any differences.

2) The sisters were constantly swapping out, so he never had the chance to REALLY get to know the things that make Molly unique, and would help him separate her from her sisters.

Tw0Cr0wsTw0Cr0wsalmost 8 years ago
@ sbrooks103 04/20/16

re:

One thing that confuses me – When Molly was off on her “one or two” nights screwing Arnie, why didn’t Amy or Hannah screw Scott?

Most likely because they were all getting so well fucked by Arnie they didn't see the need.

It was all about them.

ju8streadingju8streadingover 7 years ago

i read another one like this about triplets. the husband used 3 different colored markers sort them out. it was a good story too.

ju8streadingju8streadingover 7 years ago

they couldn't change the pattern with scott without tipping their hand

ju8streadingju8streadingover 7 years ago

there is another triplet story here just like this. and it is a good read also

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Other Endings

The ending was weak. It would have been better if Scott told Molly she had been sprung and that he would tell Ted and Arnie unless the other two sisters agreed to be impregnated by him (Scott). Molly would meanwhile be fed an oral contraceptive with her breakfast cereal and suffer agonies of frustration at her own childlessness.

Alternatively the three sisters would have been an excellent proposition to pimp out as whores.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Another possible twist,

He could have become an ass and just started "taking" what he wanted in bed every night. With no regard for his "wife's" feelings.

Get a bunch of Viagra and have at it.

How long would it take for them to catch on?

FD45FD45over 7 years ago

I wonder if he decided to tell their parents? That would make Thanksgiving dinner rather interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
what a bunch of sluts

glad he kicked her in to touch and got on with his new girlfriend....the three women deserved to be kicked in to the gutter...fucking whores....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Love this one

Wish it had gone on longer.

EzrollinEzrollinabout 7 years ago

As I read I wondered where the story was going. It was well written and kept me entertain. What more can one ask for?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Curious

I am not sure but I believe I have read something similar to this one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Would tattoos work?

If the husbands insisted on discrete tattoo, perhaps as discrete as a tiny "M" or "A" in each ear, that could give the husbands quite a high level of control, if they acted together.

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