All Comments on 'Molly Had Permission'

The direction of your recent stories in the WACC Wuss Ass Castrated Cuckold vien are just to wimpish for my taste. Moving on.....

But it could have been! Sometimes I think this isn't really what you believe in or want to see either. I often reread your earlier work to find inspiration, and most of those stories have no relationship with works like this one. I think that right now you're just bored and that you enjoy pissing your audience off or nauseating them more than just putting out another story. Let's face it you, DG, Ohio, and a bunch of other guys defined this type of story and had come up with most of the possible plots before the rest of us even started reading them. So if I see your name on a story, I'll always read it. I may not like it, but knowing how great a story you're capable of generating, the probabilities of it being great, far outweigh the chances of it being another one of these. SS06

Not the best or most well played story, but nicely turned as always.

. . . but my ex didn't give her phone number to every guy she did, just the ones that did her good.

How is this going to help the marriage excactly? I agree with SS and Rephil. This cuckold nonsense doesn't suit you at all. Where is the old JPB? is he dead and you are just using his Username?

He's goes the range from pure cuck to torch the bitch. This is part of the 2/3 that I cringe at. Its just wussy bullshit.

this is Just a story to piss folks off. Its makes no sense... so folks Just ignore this one and ignore this idiot author.

When a couple opens up Pandoras Box with cuckolding, the wife usually goes wild for a while.

Good story!

The best thing about this posting is that it is very brief.

Very nice. It's always fun to read about a woman getting all slutty and asking for it.

Ah! ... to my way of thinking, the quintessential JPB story ... the innocent, sexy little wife who discovers her slutty side and embraces it, to the delight and satisfaction of all! ... and with just enough female initiated 'dirty talk' to really rev everyone's motor.

Not my thing but it was very clear that hubby was OK with this. In the end he was excited by her hookups. She seems to be happy with the results, not only the strange she got but also with a majorly turned on hubby. The lead up is well done. He points out she is free to do as she wants as long as she is up front about it. She gets started thinking about it by single girlfriends chatting up their experiences. That seems a bit odd however. She was a virgin when she got married. Virgins don't usually hang around with slutty women and still stay virgins, for the same reasons she begins to think about other men. Talking about it starts to open doors. So where did she pick up the slutty girlfriends? <br><br>

Another nit is she goes from zero to 100 all in one party and she wasn't planning to do anything until hubby shoved her into it. I would guess that most people in such a new situation would spend the day testing the waters because of their own discomfort. Some kissing, some touching, maybe some mutual masturbation, maybe some oral sex. I would guess that it would take time to work up a comfort level. If you told me at a second or third party she jumped into it and fucked 3 guys, yeah, OK. But the first party when she wasn't even really planning it herself? Seems unreal. <br><br>

Like Stang I usually read JPB stories to see what I'll get. It's like Harry Potter's every flavor jelly beans, you don't know what you'll get and some of them are really gross. <br><br>

This one was pretty decent.

the author has done better. this was rather pathetic

This one a funny one. Thanks for the fun read.

The Department of Public Health will be calling her in, in the near future...

I think he ought to chalk her up to experience and go luck for another to keep a tighter halter on.

...most of JPB's stories are not better than this. Most are similarly retarded,redundant and the source of the question."is this all there is to your life?"

that the more they post hysterical comments, the more stories will appear aimed at winding them up? When you want a laugh, it's not the score that matters, it's the troll count!

Not sure if this was satire. In one part, hubby indicates he does not really want his wife to step out, yet he seems to actually push her to do it at the party. In general, a woman would be suspicious that her husband might wish for an excuse to try some strange himself. Or she might feel her husband doesn't value her or respect her if she is told it's OK to screw other men. A married woman wants to feel secure, and being told to go fuck one or more other men does not enhance her security within her marriage.

I gave this story 4 stars. I've read some of your other submissions. I usually pick the subjects that interest Me. What I don't understand is these other comments from people before Me. The writing was good. Very few mistakes in either spelling or structure. No problem visualizing what you were telling. If these other people commenting are looking for Hemmingway and the like...... why come to Literotica. Look within the website name. "Erotica". If it bores you, maybe it's YOU. Sometimes reading a lot of this stuff will desensitize you to the material. But it's not the fault of poor writing.

but good none the less. I like it when the wife first goes alutting. But damn, Bob, with only having on cock for all those years, you had her fucked,how many times? During one party. How long was the party. and then her husband fucked her too. Damn, I wish I had a woman like that. Oh wait a minute I do have a woman like that. Now that should piss a few of the readers off. I see 0anonymous is here.

But I sill don't see why he wanted her to fuck around on him.

I guess it's the old different strokes for different folks theroy.

Not really my cup of tea, but I like JPB's writing style generally.

I do have to agree that some guy telling his wife to go out and fuck another man or men, and then implied he didn't care who the men were, would leave a woman feeling very insecure. And an insecure woman is a dangerous one.

Most women , in reality, would be thinking one or more of these:

he has been fucking around and wants to even the score;

he wants to be rid of me and is hoping I will fall in love or make a mistake and he can use this in court;

he obviously doesn't love me because by saying I have to fuck somebody, anybody, he is exposing me to: STD's, violence, sex slavery (the US is the capital of the sex slave trade, you know) or any combination.

The story was OK, I just can't buy that a woman would be this OK with it as presented. JPB needed to think this one out.

REGARDS

C

being a weak wimpy pimp without recompence think that male humiliation excites others like it does him?

odd. why did he not give her condoms..

he don't know what she may have gotten....

idiot.

as for the story... what an idiot.

what he needed to do was get a shrink, not turn his wife into a slut.

what with there folks and there swingers ideas...???

I don't care for this type of story but at least I know why. Because I grew up in a society where sex outside of the marriage is wrong. By looking at the statistics it looks like that might be changing. You are what you learn and those that can not be receptive to change will be left behind. Even your hormones are conditioned at an early age to external stimuli. (Pavlov, 1904) so even your emotions are learned. I can only imagine what my Dad would say if I went back to the forties when he was a First Lieutenant in the Army and told him that one day the government will allow gays in the Army. He would have blown his top, after I told him what a gay was. Back in the 1700s men used to scalp other men to prove they killed him so they could collect the bounty. Who knows what will be acceptable in the 2100s. It wouldn't surprise me if religion was outlawed because people kill other people for not worshipping like they do. I've noticed that most of the readers on this site are the same. They condemn others that do not think like themselves. It's true Bob's a good writer but just because his stories don't fall within the narrow parameters of what you or I HAVE LEARNED is right or wrong doesn't make them bad. On the contrary, maybe we are just too narrow minded. It's the role of a writer to elicit emotion from the reader. What ever you say about Bob he does that and does it well. I love reading the comments from the readers of Bob's story. So, you see, Bob isn't dead he's just from another dimension or a time traveler I haven't decided which but either way his parameters of what's right and wrong are just wider than most. Or else he's just trying to get a reaction from the readers. Kind of like, poking the thin skinned humans in the cage. It's not like they can really get out and hurt him, eh? Thanks Bob for providing me with endless comments throughout the years so that I am able to keep tabs on the human race and see how far they have evolved. Just one last thought- I love the "burn the bitch for cheating" crowd. If you think about it that is exactly the way al quaeda and the taliban think. Kill any woman for cheating on her husband. Very narrow minded people. If we sent them some of these comments maybe they would stop trying to kill us and see that a lot of us are just like them. Hmmmmm Actually, a lot of you. So, before you go burning books take a good look at your behavior and ask yourself, why do dislike cheaters, why do I think that person is good looking, why do I dislike that person just from looking at them, why does SELSTIM write such fucking long comments.

P.S. C'mon Harry you can do better than that. Since when do you parrot other's comments. Even if he is a good writer. You are depriving me of my fun.

You have made a generalization that I will respond to. I do not comment on stories because of my morality. I only have a couple of morals and they pertain to family, not much else. The immorality of the rest of the population is what drives some of my comments. The people who are supposed to know say that marriage and the idea of marriage is on the decline. What is that going to lead to in a couple of decades? History shows that it will be nothing good. Religion, marriage, laws and so on give the people direction. They chip away at these things on a daily basis. We are at a turning point in history right now, the edge of the cliff. We are about to step off. If we continue evolution will probably come to a standstill. Reversion is just as likely. Hard times will make hard people. On the other hand you are going to have much to observe.

However, I rated it 5*****s because it was HOT.

I would much rather my wife be honest and up front keeping the marriage intact then to sneak around and ruin the trust. And I do think it was a hot story.

He has no spine! Willing cuckolds are so hard to understand. Why would a man want to have another man (let alone 3 men) fuck his wife? People on this site can talk until they're blue in the face, and even for a fantasy/fictional story, it makes no sense. Forget the Std problems. Forget getting pregnant (you made no mention of birth control). Just the disgusting prospect of your wife breaking her marriage vows and behaving like a slut makes me sick. And JPB seems to have a split personality. One minute he is handing the wife a grenade for cheating and the next, some wimpering simpering man is happy his wife is cheating. BITCHES BE CRAZY!

He told her to go ahead. He'd be filing for divorce the next day anyway so he didn't really care what she did. Because, really, who wants a slut for a wife that may be bringing home all kinds of diseases? Simple answer - no one.

This reads like the beginning of a story that ends in disaster for their marriage. Before long, she will be out doing everybody and his brother and he will be lucky if he ever gets sloppy fiftieths. Methinks he has created a monster.

Sorry, not much to like in this one.

Really? I guess that this is a chuckle story.

Just wants to suck a dick.

Suck ass story!

No tension, no drama, no angst, and no twist. He's screwed up, an she's a closet whore.

Wife in some of her wilder days could have been Molly. 5

I predict they stay married for two more months - tops

The best way to get a divorce is to tell your spouse she can play. And before you know it your done .

Yet another wimp.When she told him she had given them her phone number he should have shown her the door.

Another Just Plain Cuck story.

A marriage made in heaven. He’s a moron she’s a whore. Ain’t love grand.

Pathetic crap

I did not care for this story. Others might, I don’t. No vote