by Collete
This is a fun story with one big problem---it finished just a bit too abruptly. If you could work it a little more slowly it would be even better than it is.
This story really needs to continue with a Chapter 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4....
Amazing and fun story! My one nit is the end is too abrupt. I would love to read more of Molly and Amber!
Thank you for the "food"!
Please, this really needs a continuation.
Such a fun, sexy tale. I would love to read more about Molly.
Well done. Great story telling.
While I'd love to hear more about Molly's new adventures, I'm glad you wrote this story.
Molly can have my juices anytime she wants, lol. Strange but interesting story with some great sex.