All Comments on 'Mom Knows Best'

what a way to start a series

Fine story, you should continue it definitly. Next time maybe have the other sons get into the act on a trip home. I would suggest getting a good editor it could only help(I'm guessing English is a second language).

Please continue. A good start for a series, this story could go a number of ways, but please get an editor. Keep up the good work.

On page one, John's mother was Sabrina. On page two, it was Mary. WHY?