All Comments on 'Moments'

by JulietteLeM

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Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 11 years ago
Delightful writing.

Thank you.

nudepainter39nudepainter39almost 11 years ago

What a refreshing style of writing! Loved this story. Cant wait to read your other work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
incredible story

Your writing style is amazing! I really felt like I was in the mind of the narrarator. A perfect depiction of tension, urgency, and desire. and it felt so real and personal.

Just awesome!

Thank you so much for sharing this!

cfnmale4ucfnmale4ualmost 11 years ago
What an erotic piece!

Very different style and highly erotic. I hope she writes more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Beautiful writing.

This is the single most beautifully erotic thing I have ever read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

This has to be one of the most thrilling, descriptive pieces of erotic literature I've ever read. And no one has commented on it? I love the detailed execution, the unabashed sexual desire of the main character and her vivid imagination, the unique personalities of all the models, including sweet Laurent. Despite everything being from the view of the artist, the way she described model...man, this whole thing was astounding. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
You're very talented.

Such a naughty, talented writer you are!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wow

This is so hot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Fucking amazing... Thankyou

speakingmusicspeakingmusic6 months ago

This is exquisite. Painted with words like the sketches and yet so alive.

RamseyMacDonaldRamseyMacDonald3 months ago

Wonderful evocative writing! Love this.

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