All Comments on 'Mommy isn't Kissing Santa This Year'

Not important in the grand scheme of things I know, but I've never seen it spelled "Santa Clause" before. It's usually "Claus". A clause is a subsection of a sentence.

Not a bad story, but the spelling and grammar were so bad it was distracting.

I now believe in Mrs. Sexy Claus!

I'm not sure why I did it as "Clause" it's can't be that movie as I hated it. Could be something like "color or colour" type the.

Also I know my grammar isn't too crash hot, but I am trying to get better and really I do this because I enjoy it and find it fun so hopefully I will get better with time.

I just hope that the story was enjoyed!

~Skye

Whatever it was, you ruined a good story by failing to do a good editing job.

To the anony that said I was careless or ignorant terribly sorry, I know my story is not perfect, it is just supposed to be fun.

I enjoyed writing it and that is what matters to me.

cant get over the anonymous asses that keep bitching about spelling and grammar the story is fun and the more you write the other things will improve especially with the help of a good editor.

What a geat story... I always knew there was a lot we didn't know about Santa and his Family. I'll bet the Elves could tell some stories. Tazer.

The story has merit. Yes the grammar, spelling an sentence structure could be worked on but that is all secondary to a good story. You have great ideas and next time find a editor to help with the rest. The most important thing is to have fun and enjoy writing. Those two are the hardest elements, the rest is easily fixable. Don't give up just because people think they could do better but have never even tried. Keep it up and as you do you will get better.

It was a good story and a lot of fun. But I must admit the grammer, spelling, and language is a bit troublesome. That said, don't let it prevent you from writing, if you've got a story to tell it will get down on paper (computer) and eventually you'll get all the other stuff right. Not that big a deal.

Thank you!

T

Do this as an Audio and soon Please!

You knwo it would rock as an audio !

great story,nice twist and just filled with the stuff thats naughty and nice!