All Comments on 'Mom's a Tease Ch. 03'

This was hot! I particularly liked the way you started off with the dream by the pool and then developed the story further by bringing their lust for each other to a great conclusion. Well done Shy one!

excellent work your quite adept at this thanks and keep up the good work

Great ending to a great story. I loved the mother's confliction. Keep writing. You have a great voice.

It's a nice story and fun to read. But the dialogues are not fitting in my opinion. They're should be more modest, instead of "do you like ramming your tongue in mommies pussy?" It would be much more believeable, they're dealing with first time incest, wouldn't that be enough to get in the mood, so to speak.

but is it a real ending.....does mom take control back or will son dominate this horny mom......let us know....more

I enjoyed this story! Yes, typos, but overall it had my attention almost from the very beginning. I hope you listen to your fan base and keep on writing, you did need their permission, didn't you?

Thanks Don

needs better ending to see what happens to mom and son for myself would be good if no one else came into the story like the other two she was dreaming about all the time that would ruin it for me awesome story so far cant wait for more

Hot ending but it was kind of quick.

Real good story, please keep up the good work

damn ruined by the ass fucking..

Shy, you are a gifted erotic writer whose only sin would be if you stopped this enticing erotic demonstration of pure sexual action. Please keep writing I'll do anything you need, to keep going. You are amazing and whoever is your partner in life will never be bored. Tremendous story.

And a happy ending. I especially like the boy growing stronger and the mother giving into her desires. You have a great talent for reflecting both male and female emotions..

Great story, except for the anal. Can't we have _ANY_ stories without anal?

The sublime greatness of motherfucking is that the boy gets his hard young cock up the same cunt he came out of. There's also the possibility of his fucking a baby up where he was once a baby. A boy's penis and his mother's vagina--made for each other.

chapter 2 and 3 only seem to have one page each but ch 2 ends withmum running upstairs in shame and in ch 3 they have already been having sex... i want to find out how they got to that stage ... probably a page has been dropped somehow ... did ch 2 have a second page? great story, i love the teasing parts best, the grey area between being a bit too daring and prolonged incest with no return :) thank you for writing!

:)

You fucked it up with the shitty anal crap.

Great incestuous slut mom / son story. Totally edging through most of all 3 chapters. One small criticism for me was how you the characters go back and read from there P.O.V. I don't mind switching P.O.V.'s. I just bumped slightly on going back rather than picking up at the next beat in story, regardless of who's P.O.V. we're reading. Just me.

Very erotic, thanks for posting

I rated Ch 1 and 2 a 4. This chapter earned a 5. What is missing is how and when did the son develope a spine. Psychologically, how did he handle the terrible sexual ending of the evening 2 nights ago? I over think these stories because I like indepth and breadth character development. Likewise, I like plot(s) that is/are logically developed. I do not read these stories for the sex but for the hopeful mental processes of the characters. Likewise, how did the mother manage to psychologically realionalize her actions from the past night? What was she psychologically looking for? What was her purpose of embarrassing her son? What had her son done to give her such a low opinion of him? Some many questions unanswered.