All Comments on 'Mom's Little Secret'

Not only the guy in the club, you've got me hooked too. More. More

Especially nice,....easy to read style of writing. Uncluttered and quite visual. There is a freshly cut jem of a story here,...huge potential,...and I will be watching as you polish it up with your wicked naughty imagination.

Just as other's are sure to ask,..."more dear author,...more....!"

But far too short. More, please. Much more!

On to the next chapter!

*Very* well written, and erotic as hell. It's a brilliant stand-alone, but everybody, I'm sure, wants to get to knew Veronica intimately. Whatever you write, I'll read.

is on the way. Assuming that it develops as planned i will be taking you inside the VIP room very shortly

reading this was so very erotic and horny.

stiff as steel is was i am with that very hot fantastic story. more please.

Just not too informative. Is there a ch.2?

I loved how the story set you up for more to come, i hope there is more to come!

Lame. Very lame. Not even a good setup for the next one.

it is a very good story.

hoping you do write more