All Comments on 'Mom's Little Secret'

it is a very good story.

hoping you do write more

Lame. Very lame. Not even a good setup for the next one.

I loved how the story set you up for more to come, i hope there is more to come!

Just not too informative. Is there a ch.2?

reading this was so very erotic and horny.

stiff as steel is was i am with that very hot fantastic story. more please.

is on the way. Assuming that it develops as planned i will be taking you inside the VIP room very shortly

*Very* well written, and erotic as hell. It's a brilliant stand-alone, but everybody, I'm sure, wants to get to knew Veronica intimately. Whatever you write, I'll read.

On to the next chapter!

But far too short. More, please. Much more!

Especially nice,....easy to read style of writing. Uncluttered and quite visual. There is a freshly cut jem of a story here,...huge potential,...and I will be watching as you polish it up with your wicked naughty imagination.

Just as other's are sure to ask,..."more dear author,...more....!"

Not only the guy in the club, you've got me hooked too. More. More