by WindUpSpace
Does every story on this site have to contain ass sex. To each his own, I guess, and I'm not moralizing, believe me, and I doubt anatomy and physiology lessons are required, but just in case they do, for chrissakes shit comes out of there. I will never understand this particular kink. It's getting to be that every goddamned story has a shit chute scene or ten, and they go into gory and lengthy details. I know I'm gonna hear it from plenty of people now , but I'm a big boy I can handle it. I juist had to get that off my chest and this was the last story and I was coming fresh off it.
Anyway, 3 stars because other than the fudge pounding it was pretty hot.
All overwritten narrative, no explicit dialogue. Boring.
Suggest that you keep narratives to a minimum.
They are to complement the story line, not dominate.
In describing an intimate relationship, it is the dialogue that is the more sensual and dynamic.
Try adding some pregnancy/ mother/son marriage/ in depth bathroom fetish scenes for variety in future concepts. Otherwise your stories will remain drab and mediocre.
Another episode like this please! Especially with the ass licking afterwards!
You caught all the elements - lactation, anal, Mom and daughter getting screwed by son - to make a really great erotic story. Please continue. I want to see him knock up Megan, or even Jean...