All Comments on 'Mom's New Recipe Ch. 04'

PLEASE write as many chapters of this tale as you can... I love how you make the MILFs act like every fantasy I've ever had. And particularly liked this phrase: "patterns of freckles across her shoulders and chest and her face gave her even more the appearance of a stalking cat as her shoulder blades moved back and forth and her spine swayed smoothly from side to side, framed beneath by the smooth round cheeks of her ass." Wow -sheer poetry - what a visual you painted!

U CAN'T QUIT NOW, I THINK U'R JUST GETTING WOUND UP. PUSSY BOY MICHAELS CAN PLAY A LESSER PART, BUT FUCK THE REST OF THE FAMILY, OVER & OVER.

THANKS FOR SPELLING AND GRAMMAR.

Windupspace writes a smooth tale. I thought his descriptions and word pictures were outstanding. This is a erotic a tale I have read in a long time. A picky picky from the old school I knelt down or I kneeled down? Knelt is smoother for me. But I will read on.

This is one of the best story series i have read in a very long time please continue adding more. like wat happens with megan does she find out about the threesome with liam, jean, and her "boyfriend"? Does she ever have a threesome with allison and her bro?, or a foursome with with the whole family? i mean please you must continue.

what happens with mom,sis and the girlfriend

dude that would piss me off if i had a girl that wouldnt let me her vag but make me fuck her ass

I don't understand the theme of this story. After reading the first chapter I thought it was a romance novel between the Nick and his sister, as they had confessed their love for each other. After that there is a threesome between the mother snd the siblings. After the threesome there is sex only between the mother and Nick for a while. Then Megan came in and the sister Alyson was found a lesbian who was in love with Megan. Still Megan continued having sex with Nick, even at her own house. At the end Nick starts fucking Megan's mother Jean, who had also some lesbian sex with Nick's mom at past. You are simply involving too much characters in this story and it's not going anywhere. It should've been placed in orgy or group sex category. Try to relax and eliminate few characters in the next chapter, if you write one. From incest you have jumped to lesbian sex then anal sex and now adultery

Since Nick keeps cumming in Alison's womb, when are we going to find out that she's gotten knocked up? It's been several months, and no mention of them using birth control of any sort, so it's bound to happen, sooner or later. Same with his mom. Granted, it took me 2 years of unprotected sex to knock up my wife, but it DID happen...

I agree but on that same fact there's no mention of none of the girls he did using birth control but the 2 likely to end up pregnant would be his mom and sister

it appears you stopped writing it in the middle, but I enjoyed it. If the hero was going to fuck every good looking woman in the county, turning them all bi-sexual in the process, why did he stop here.

I never really considered (or in fact was aware anyone considered) breast milk as a fetish, but it seems an interesting idea. I may try writing a story which includes human breast milk.

Sort of good but author needs a lesson in anatomy. Balls don't slip into a vagina, dicks don't enter wombs, and there is no sphincter that you must get past for penile vaginal sex.

after a little reading and the husband did nothing i knew he was a cuck i think another chapter should have him giving blow jobs to nick.

Yes, turn this into the husband sucking dick and eating cream pies.

Ever wonder why this ass wipe always posts nasty fucking comments? He's insane and need help. Just ignore his raving and his crazy ass words. You see his wife, oh sorry dead ex wife cheated on him their entire marriage and he sucked so much cum from her nasty cunt he is now brain dead.

I saw the MMF 3some coming a mile away and the cliche of sis being in love with her best friend who she has lesbian sex with is old and tired as is the son being in love with the mom but is just sisters fuck buddy. Sorry but lost interest in the characters and story by ch2

Too far. Always too far. It was going so well. Megan made things weird. Jean then pushing in Liam. Really took fantasy from story. You put yourself in dude place when reading these. You want to be that stud getting all the pussy but doing what they did to Jean kills it. Besides you said this was about mother and sister.