All Comments on 'Mom's New Year's Record'

by zipadofan

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
lame... and confusing

too many names, too confusing and completely lame story idea

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great!

This is a really hot story, please let us know what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Disturbing...but undeniably hot.

The theme of this story is totally disturbing, fallacious and completely unbelievable....but despite all that it made me as hard as a rock...I so would love to have been at that party and want more chapters to follow...soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
another sick one

Another sick story by another horny teenager. It would not have been bad if he had told mom to shove it next morning and left town, but as written it's too sick for my taste. Incest is one thing but gangbanging mom is too much. the Ct. Yankee

JRavenJRavenover 17 years ago
Loved it!

Although I suspect the story wasn't written by zipadofan's son, it does come off as being written by a horny teenager that had "ejaculated" onto his mother. I didn't care for the frequent use of ejaculate or his seemingly difficulty in saying "tits".

On the other hand, I almost wish it was me in the middle of the living room!

Jenny

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
INCREDIBLE ! ! !

This story is so hot it's through the roof! The bukkake party and the scene in the attic, mindblowing! And it sounds like it just could be real!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
wow

this is one of the hottest stories ever. nothing like a mom that loves cum.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
wow

man!! only if there were more stories like this. this was awesome. do a chapter 2 or something

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
sure, mom's a slut

But there's something intriguing about a mother whose cunt is open to all cummmers. I bet lots of boys'd love to see their dear mommy in that position--her thighs spread wide and their own damn birth canal slammed and pounded by lots of cock, till mom needs their help to walk straight. Pints of semen streaming down her ass and legs, and mom crying, "more, more!"

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Overuse of one word?

Ejaculate is overused. Try "cum, cum shot, spunk" and may others. But not a bad story though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Sequal

Make a sequal, bring aunt cate in, or maybe him and his mom set up a party with his friends instead of the normal crowd

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