All Comments on 'Mom's Wait for Her Son'

Oh I enjoyed this story tremendously, a few spots could have used a little polish in grammar or spelling, however it didn't detract from the story. Lets see some more writings from you. It kept me nice and moist.

Wow, I liked this one because the story line seemed so realistically believable and thats what makes an erotic story so hot. If this was your first try I think you should try and write some more. I was totally into this story.

Not many stories have kept my attention to the point I keep coming back to it and reread it. This one does, it mezmerized me to a level its difficult for me to understand. This story was written some years ago, however, I hope this author writes some additional stories. Remember just a few seconds longer correcting some spelling and grammatical errors would have polished this story to utter perfection. Thanks

The story line of any piece of writing work is how believable it is to the reader. I enjoyed this story and the story line; to me it was a very good work of erotica. I agree a limited amout of spelling could have used work, however it does not take away of the story. I enjoy all types of erotica, but this one was really a good piece of work. It's been awhile for you, try writing some other story lines. Thanks

Lori I've read your story several times. I understand the cravings you went through, the battle that went on inside of your mind and body. Knowing how difficult it was for you to resist your son. I finally surcame to my lust for my son just a few nights ago after reading your story again and relized I couldn't hold back any longer. Although there is some guilt, it as lead to days of incredible sex. I've never felt anything like this in my 45 years of being alive. So many times I resisted.

mom never waited for anything she fucked every cock that came her way not a very good story in my book

That's why we're so good together, we both like to cum a lot. The first time is always pretty quick, lasting only for several minutes. After that, he lasts longer, and longer, each time we fuck. Eventually we can go at it for over thirty minutes straight. Some days we're a little sore when we get started, but after we've gone at it for a while, we seem to kind of forget about it.

Very good first effort.