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bugonthewallbugonthewallabout 11 years ago
future

is this gonna be a full story or just leave it as it is

Havoc100Havoc100over 1 year ago

You really need to take some story writing classes. Many of your stories are missing a conflict. What is the conflict in this "story"? You set up the intro into the creation of your character but then you don't do anything with it. We are left with nothing.

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I am Samuelx. I am Black. I am Male. I was born in Cap-Haitien, Northern Haiti, and raised in Brockton, Massachusetts. I now live in Canada. I am the one and only Haitian Trickster, and quite simply live only by my own rules. I...