All Comments on 'Monica'

I enjoyed the flow of the story almost as much as the sex. Having him call out Monica's name while making love to his girlfriend was a good device, and a realistic one. This is a teenager's dream story, and many of us have been the teen dreaming it.

lovely,,,just lovely. well paced, fitting climax.

Wow, I had to make myself slow down and savor each word of this great story. Wonderful and very realistic in pacing and the words and the storyline.

I hope you write more like it based on these same charaters.

great story I just wish there was some doggy style lol.

Monica sounds like a beautiful women, that i would love forever if i could find one.

Well written, this one could go on into a series. Life on the farm makes it soreal to many who have been there and makes it a possibility.I would like to see more of their new life ,but as usual you cut the story off at the end with a little update of thir future when you could just add to it with more chapters.

(Sorry it's taken this long for me to make a comment on this story, but hey life gets in the way).

Really liked the story. Would have been interesting to hear more about how everyone would have reacted to James marrying Monica and getting her pregnant.

Another interesting thing would have been a story set in the future when their child finds out about how they came to be.