All Comments on 'Monika Can't Resist Him'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
had me going

thot it was another slut wife/black man story. didn't see the twist. 2nd baby eh?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Where have you been?????

Dude there has never been an author on this site that has ever written a "BLACK" erotic story so well like this before and it was slutty too. Oppps I forgot you fooled us with the husband and wife thing. Anyway, I hope you write a lot more stories because we need more black erotic stories on this site and many others on the www. The nastier and taboo they are the better I always say. Romance stories are cool but boring sometimes/all times. We need hot steamy, almost getting caught fucking her brother in-law on the kitchen counter while hubby is playing spades or poker with the boys in the next room type stuff. Anyway let me stop rambling but your stories are so off da chain got me excited and now I'll be checking the site every other night for your new stuff. Keep doing da dam thang!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Loved the twist at the end.

That is a damn good story. Too often we see stuff on this site that is total fantasy. You've written a couple damn good stories so far.

I'm selfish, like many readers. But I wish you'd take your Maxwell character, the personal trainer, and make a series with him.

Back to this story, though. You definitely had me going. I totally thought it was just another slut wife story. I'm sure you might have lost a couple readers because they didn't get to the end before thinking it was another black man, big dick story.

You might want to drop a few hints earlier. Just so you don't lose many people. But that's just me being nitpicky.

I'm waiting for the next one.

fakers51fakers51about 19 years ago
It was away from the ordinary

She came she saw and got hold or Quynton and did not let him go. Monika was in line behind a lot of women as Quynton was dancing in his club, getting a little love from other women. Monika came a long and bided her time then took over.

fakers51fakers51about 19 years ago
It was away from the ordinary

She came she saw and got hold or Quynton and did not let him go. Monika was in line behind a lot of women as Quynton was dancing in his club, getting a little love from other women. Monika came a long and bided her time then took over.

fakers51fakers51about 19 years ago
It was away from the ordinary

She came she saw and got hold or Quynton and did not let him go. Monika was in line behind a lot of women as Quynton was dancing in his club, getting a little love from other women. Monika came a long and bided her time then took over.

ohioohioalmost 18 years ago
cool surprise ending

A hot story, and a nice surprise twise--I didn't see it coming.

When will you be posting more stories?

ohio

DWornockDWornockalmost 13 years ago
Some people like this story.

However, he is 36 years old. There is no demand for a striper that old so I rated it 1*.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Where

Where do you come up with these names? Do you throw a handful of Scrabble tiles in the floor? Silly as your story.

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