All Comments on 'Moonlight'

You should be arrested for this queer crap

I am not interested in flaming...no respect for those who do, but at the same time I see nothing of value in this story. The storyline itself is as old as Lit. As usuall your technical writing skills are fine, but the content is jaded and lackluster. No tension except to wonder why any man would put up with such treatment, and why any woman would treat someone she loved in such a manner.

Mary has the life and is enjoying it. John also is enjoying what his wife is doing and was able to identify the taste of Samuel. This was definite well written and you could feel the excitement of both benefactors of the wifes night out. You could feel John just getting excited about who she would choose next thursday night. Thanks for sharing a nice story.

didn't read it as soon as i see your name i throw up.

You are no doubt a good writer, i do wonder why a man would allow such things, but hey it's your story and I assume your lifestyle at some point in time.

I liked it, could have been better? Maybe. I for one would have loved to see the teasing in the moon light stretched out a bit. There is something really HOT about a sexy woman posing in the moonlight.

I enjoyed it. Iespecially like the fact that his wife takes her lover's semen inside her. The thought of extramarital pregnancy of the wife being a possibility is always a turnown.

So what does John do, when one night his wife stops coming home at all? Because it seems pretty likely that will happen eventually. That is why it is always an unacceptable risk for a couple to bring in third parties. Of course, maybe he looks forward to the night she never comes home again.

but I don't think too many men could live like that in real life.

Sharing her with another man while he is getting to use one of her orifices would be acceptable,but waiting at home while she has all of the fun would be really hard to accept.

As to that, I don't think the story is very believable, but that's just me.

Thanks for the story.

the hot in this tale. I rather play Russian roulette if I had a death wish. I don't need some uncurable illness

my compliments.

I personally woulndt 'assume the lifestyle' at no point in my life. Fucking disgusting read nobbi you must have assumed a degree of madness. 5 stars.

Your a good writer, get out of this rut.

So you get points for being at least consistent - as many have said, this garbage belongs in fetish or the "eternally cluck/fag" category not LW.

We guess a challenge for this author would be to submit a non-cluck/wimp story - but most likely not because like a cheater; "always a cheater".

Story is utter trash. There is no good stuff, just a quick dive into the part that nobody likes. This is nothing more than a story written by a fag to try get straight guys to read about eating another man's cum. Here's the thing, no straight man would do that. Period.

....decent comment, your story's are silly little boys wanting to be girls take-offs. I think a great analogy to this is someone addicted to eating Durians. Imagine needing to clothespin your nose to stomach the eating.

Just like a rapist telling you "it's not gonna hurt"

1 star for you

Nothing but un-redeaming, un-reality in this story! And that's being nice.

Plain sick and disgusting. There's nothing erotic about this garbage.

You write well madam, and for a certain type of insane person this was an enjoyable pastime.

Not convinced it would work for anyone else though..

This is a story involving psychological fetish! It has nothing to do with a wife, loving or otherwise. It does however, involve a slut who enjoys sharing other people's bodily fluids with her husband. I wonder what other little bugs she is sharing with him?

I totally disagree with the negative comments. Highly erotic story, and licking another mans cum from on (or in) your wife is a very loving thing to do

I totally disagree with the positive comments. Nothing erotic about this story and licking another man's cum from or (or in) your wife is a very SICK thing to do.

Nice title,but revolting story..only a sick mind would indulge in this kind of thing....

Do people like this bother to get married . and why do so many authors have such disdain for it . If you dont like marriage , dont get married , you dont have to lash out at it with every story . Believe it or not , even in todays " look at me " and " Me Me Me " society . Most Married people DO stay Faithful . That also is a choice , as that is the whole point of a marriage for most people . We as a community need to push for a Swinger/Swap category on this site to place things where they belong .

But I don't know, I think this might be in the wrong category... I have a bit of a cuckold fetish myself, so I loved it, and would love to experience this a couple of times. I think my wife likes the idea too. It will be fun.

But I do acknowledge that this is a fetish, and not for everybody.

5*****'s.

Enough said.

Just not my style.

Every time one of these stories appear you just have to think that the writer is some gay, who is afraid to admit he likes slurping cocks and has to use a woman in the story to justify the jizz guzzling.

racist trash... sick couple... worthless marriage... worthless woman... worthless man.

It doesn't get any worse than that.

his cornhole buggered, he smoked a meaty cock, betrayed!

This writer is one sick puppy. No need to say more.

1* Sick sick asshole

Very hot as a single night, waiting for a real wife to come back from an adventure with an interesting new aspect to her development. The sweet uncertainty of how she reacts, and how Hubby reacts, and how THEY now interact.

However, it is fairly apparent that this is a well-rehearsed and established example of the couple's relationship! Sweetie has a good deal, Sambo has a great deal but If Hubby is OK with his slice of this creampie, he is just plain stupid or brainwashed!

That makes the story a LOT less erotic, IMHO!

4*

I would give the slut something to suck, the pointy end of my 38.1929

Hey sicko go away

Put this nasty shit in IR!!!!!!!!!!

If you get off on another guy fucking your wife

Have at it

Truth be told i might have been one of them she doesn't tell you everything but she did tell me of your writing

You certainly want to hit all the notes of controversy.

This is total nonsense. A vignette of 15 minutes in the life of a cuck.and whore.

VERY erotic, sensual...and different..!!!

...being married to Mary...life certainly would NOT be boring...!!

Another non-original story about a slug wife and a weak, mentally messed up husband. Wow you must hate real men because they don’t share and pick up someone else’s cum.

Disgusting ir cuck story from the disgusting BobupBobbi. Little black Sambo. That's good Bob.

Ergo, no score.

Mary: Cheating slut

John: Idiot, Cuck, Wimp, FOOL

Sam: Asshole

Sorry Bobbi but generallyI hate your stories.

filth

BobnBobbi is clearly a racist. Sadly, the that's one of its better qualities.

Wife comes home from a night out

Didnt bother reading it, but let me finish the above sentence the correct way

Wife comes home from a night out, and husband comes out from the closet.

I'll bet a 5 star rating on a cuck story I am completely correct.