All Comments on 'Moonlight Window Ch. 02'

First I've read and I'll be back. Good balance. You might want to correct "choses tendres"

The song lines in French were copied and pasted from online lyrics sources. More than one had the same lyrics I used. Anyone have more-correct lyrics? Happy to revise.

I'm also having a Literotica volunteer editor look at this when he gets the chance.

I don't speak French, so assistance is always appreciated.

try to keep people's names straight. Bill and Sam got switched around so many times it was ludicrous, and even Deb & Lara got switched at least once. I like this story quite a bit, but that sort of thing really throws me out of the flow.

I finally got an editor. Took a while.

That will keep name problems to a minimum. Thanks for the comment.