All Comments on 'Moonlit Visitor Ch. 03'

its good, please continue.

I feel like I overlooked something in the last chapter. How come Alice doesn't recognize Dante? Did I miss something? A secret enchantment or whatever? Someone tell me what I missed...anyone. I'm loving this story. Looking forward to the next post.

but please, learn how to properly use "whom" and also clean up the other grammar and spelling a bit.... maybe you can find an editor to help you.

I think this can be a really great story. It just needs a little help!

The story started off well, albeit with somewhat dodgy grammar. Unfortunately, the grammar seems to be getting worse and the story itself seems to be getting disjointed.

Why doesn't she recognise Dante? You also really NEED an editor.

not sure how I got so far behind....doesn't really matter....catching up now and loving it

never fully being cognizant. Unchartered memories hidden. TK U MLJ LV NV