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MacDukeMacDukeover 18 years ago
Exquisite Setting

These Minx stories present an exquisite setting and scene for erotic fun. But having built the readers excitement to the peak, the author seems to rush the ending. It would have been great to experience Ilene by the husband as well as Gillian. And I would have loved to hear Becky explore her bi-sexuality after she got into it. But after the initial sex between Gill and Ilene, the rest is just assumed. Anticipation dashed!

Would love to read a third chapter involving the counselor, who must have personal experience with George and Ilene. And it would be wonderful if Sally could give her viewpoint on the next chapter. Something like the detail she shared in "Sally's Fantasy" would work great in the third chapter. Her experience of bi-sexuality is assumed in these stories without Paul's explanation.

But great stories that only get better.

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