All Comments on 'More than Bedside Manner'

Amazing, Simply amazing

I actually didn't know how your were going to get the reluctance/pressing combination to work: it would have to take a very long time and slowly wear down her resistance, bit by bit, making it difficult to keep the writing balanced. But the change happened more suddenly, not unrealistically but just by a kind of accident that is the sort of thing that does happen.

This was absolutely beautiful. Thank you for an amazing and touching read.

Sorry, but I just couldn't get past Shane's ego-centric smugness. By the time we got to see her vulnerable side, I was too annoyed to appreciate it.

It's so hard to find such a touching erotic story, it was an absolute pleasure to read. As another comment mentioned Shane's smugness could indeed have been annoying and I didn't immediately warm to the character, but like the doctor she won me over, which made me far more involved with the story, very clever. Will be looking for more of your stories in the future.

I enjoyed this story. I disagree with the people that say Shane is too smug. At the end we find that she really does want love. I think we need to see that smug side at first or else the effect of her changing in the end would be weakened.

Questions---why is Shane alone? No family, friends, acquaintances from work? Why is Liz able to see through Shane's act? It seems that she has a warm, open heart. More about her medical training, build her up a little more. What are her past sexual experiences?

That was sweet

I love reading from the Random Story section, cause you find nice stories like this one.

Wished there was a pt 2 I loved it

This was a good story. I wish it were longer than just two pages. Too bad there was no chapter two, it would have been a wonderful series. Five well earned stars.

Loved it

Wish it were longer, or had a part two, but thanks for sharing it with us!

I do not give very many stories 5 stars but this was very well written and I agree it was too short I hope it keeps going

The passion was really great, but the story needed to be longer. Slam bam thank you ma’am. BTW Let’s get married, isn’t that romantic. 4 stars for empathy and passion, which I did enjoy

There seemed to be a lot of obstacles simply ignored inorder to have a quick and sadly unfullfilling resolution.