All Comments on 'More than Friends: Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Brilliant development

Hi!

I loved this!

You know, I am absolutely intrigued by the best friends falling in love plot line. It's a great and believable plot and you are doing a great job. Please post the new chapter soon! I am really looking forward to it.

subdued_passionsubdued_passionalmost 10 years agoAuthor

Thank you. To let you in on a secret, I've written all but the last chapter. But I've decided to stick to posting one chapter per week just so that I don't end up rushing (I tend to do that) to the finish line.

Maybe this way I'll even proof read the thing first. ;)

JemgirlJemgirlalmost 10 years ago
love it so far

I can't wait for the next installment. I really like the plot so far.

DebbieWrightDebbieWrightalmost 10 years ago
Stunning.

I can relate to this totally. I fell in love with my best friend !!!! Complicated ..... Exciting. Xxxxx

Debbie

arrowglassarrowglassalmost 10 years ago
A terrific teaser for Chap. 2

I am hooked...great writing and story line...waiting for the next one!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

This seems a lot like the plot to Mujhse Dosti Karoge... definitely well written. Did you get inspiration from that?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
if I would write I'd like to write your style

Great Start with an intoxicating gimme more note.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
ive seen this movie many times! ;)

You're Indian aren't you!!...chuckles. I absolutely loved the movie your story seems inspired from by the way!

Anonymous
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