All Comments on 'More Than He Bargained For'

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sub_pilot_guysub_pilot_guyabout 15 years ago
Great story to begin with though a bit fast

The story line was great though moved a bit quickly. Nice to read more as it is played out over time to more detailed events.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Well done.

Been there. Done that. Want to have it done to me again...

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