All Comments on 'More Than Just a Fairy Tale'

by Jaisen

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Anonymousover 5 years ago

Good story plot.

Nice start but you needs an editor or three.

ThunderPrincess almost 12 years ago

Thanks

I Find i really enjoyed this story! So Far it is amazing!

Jaisen almost 13 years agoAuthor

The Kate issue

Look up a few comments... all is explained. :)

Anonymousalmost 13 years ago

????

Who is Kate??? @}-,-'-

Anonymousalmost 13 years ago

yeah lol, who's kate?

ushergal about 13 years ago

individually the stories are good but when you put them all together they are one of the greatest stories on the site and I for one do not want this story to end even though you might end Luke and Meg's storie but it feel it can go on for all their life

Jaisen over 13 years agoAuthor

To Anonymous

I have to admit that you are the first one to catch that little goof! I changed the character's name about 2 pages in and missed that one. Hope you enjoy the series.

Anonymousover 13 years ago

great story, but whos kate?

angelx602 almost 14 years ago

That was great!

It was so romantic and I was so glad when she stopped freaking out and went back to the tent with him. I cannot wait to read more. Greeat job.

Jaisen about 14 years agoAuthor

Yes, there will be a second part. You'll just have to wait a bit. LOL

I_M_Patient about 14 years ago

A different twist on the old tale...

Well done. There will be a part 2, right?

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