All Comments on 'Morning Departure'

The ending seemed rushed, like the author's laptop battery was dieing. Also - hands in pockets? I guess navy is different than Army, where the only excuse for hand in pocket is to molest yourself.

There was no group sex in this story so it doesn't really fit the category. This is not a negative on the story, just where it was listed. Nice surprise at the end, kind of an "and everyone lived happily ever after" ending.

She should have told him about the letter and the marital difficulties. Does she like him feeling guilty?