All Comments on 'Morose Monk'

Costumed protags seem to be your idiom og :)

Fun story.

-Colly

Cloistered gets a whole new meaning.

Not terribly erotic, but definitely an amusing story.

I liked it.

Seems like you're starting to get into the habit, so to speak, of ecclesiastical erotica. That's a good thing.

Rumple

It was interesting and a fun read. As Sack said, the erotic part could have been longer but that is just my preference and doesn't have to be yours. I can't help thinking that Alan should have been able to recognize Louise or not from her voice, mannerisms or the way her body felt against him. Maybe not a certainty but close to it.

Since you are so gifted, why not give the readers what they want and outline a long, throbbing hot sex scene at the end? the ultimate sentence just encourages unibombers! Good luck, Sack

Another great tale for trick or treating readers...<grin> Good Luck Og~ (*_*) HAPPY HAALOWEEN