All Comments on 'Mother & Daughter Whore Team'

Your writing style has developed and improved tremendously throughout Ali and Fiona's adventures. Reading their bar crawl was like a slow fuck with my neighbor's wet dream wife from my teen years.

Your story telling keeps getting better.

Please stop rushing these wonderful stories to the public and give them a careful proof read first though. The grammar, syntax and word choice errors are all completely avoidable at this point in your writing and are an unnecessary distraction.

Really enjoyed the whole series of stories about Fiona and Alice. Well written exploits of two cock-hungry sluts

More please

The story premise is good. And it all ends there. The grammar is horrendous. Some of the slang is difficult to understand without Googling for its meaning.

Great story my husband takes my sister and me whoreing and makes us do slutty things to the point of both of us being ganged in a club toilet