by SexyWriter101
loved the story, made me wet right there! keep writing~
A nice quick story that I would like to see more of.
Maybe the author would give us some details of what happened that summer.
Thanks for the good read
I just wish there had been more. All in all, it was pretty good first attempt. I'm with Rich, I hope to see more of your work. Thanks for your submission.
Good story, and like others have already said, it would be nice to flesh it out a bit.
Lovely story. You put yourself very well in the son's shoes (I was surprised the writer was a woman!). Please keep writing.
This story is great & I hope to read more of your stories soon.
A semi-rape, completely devoid of any mutual discovery, love, excitement, fulfillment. A cock fucking a pussy, period.