All Comments on 'Mother and Son Virgins'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
fantastic quick read!

loved the story, made me wet right there! keep writing~

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Brilliant Read.

A fantastic read please do follow up.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 14 years ago
Short but good

A nice quick story that I would like to see more of.

Maybe the author would give us some details of what happened that summer.

Thanks for the good read

oldwayneoldwayneabout 14 years ago
Nice little tale...

I just wish there had been more. All in all, it was pretty good first attempt. I'm with Rich, I hope to see more of your work. Thanks for your submission.

The_Dork_KnightThe_Dork_Knightabout 14 years ago
I like it

Good story, and like others have already said, it would be nice to flesh it out a bit.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
sweet

Lovely story. You put yourself very well in the son's shoes (I was surprised the writer was a woman!). Please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Great story.

This story is great & I hope to read more of your stories soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Good quick read :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

A semi-rape, completely devoid of any mutual discovery, love, excitement, fulfillment. A cock fucking a pussy, period.

SteamerPoiny68SteamerPoiny687 months ago

Over too quick, not enough build up or emotions, from either party.......

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