All Comments on 'Mother and Son Virgins'

Over too quick, not enough build up or emotions, from either party.......

A semi-rape, completely devoid of any mutual discovery, love, excitement, fulfillment. A cock fucking a pussy, period.

Good quick read :)

This story is great & I hope to read more of your stories soon.

Lovely story. You put yourself very well in the son's shoes (I was surprised the writer was a woman!). Please keep writing.

Good story, and like others have already said, it would be nice to flesh it out a bit.

I just wish there had been more. All in all, it was pretty good first attempt. I'm with Rich, I hope to see more of your work. Thanks for your submission.

A nice quick story that I would like to see more of.

Maybe the author would give us some details of what happened that summer.

Thanks for the good read

A fantastic read please do follow up.

loved the story, made me wet right there! keep writing~