All Comments on 'Mother-in-Law is Disciplined Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
What a giant pile of manure

Horrible writing. Unimaginative dialogue. Not a single clever, interesting or entertaining part in this mess. Just plain terrible.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
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In Part 2, Kathleen & Karen will take the contents of their diapers and cover Tom in their shit!

C_frommnC_frommnabout 10 years ago
Anon & Anon

If its so terrible why are you still reading. it is easy to look for stories you like.

I am enjoying it just wish the chapters were longer.

0ra11yfix8ed0ra11yfix8edabout 10 years ago
Not my usual cup of tea, but....

there are women who need this. Women who make poor choices. Women who raise daughters who continue those poor choices. Could use some editing but all in all an interesting take!

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