All Comments on 'Mother of the Dairy Maid'

You should really submit your work to a proofreader before posting it. This was a pretty hot story except for the distraction of words out of place and misspellings. Try to clean it up a bit before posting Ann's return with her friend (s) to enjoy your company another night.

While the story sounds good, the reading gets disrupted by incorrect spellings, stuttering syntax, using 'the Ann' as if Ann is a title and not the name of a person and some spelling indicating the lack of knowledge of the written word. Is phonetic spelling the norm at Literotica?

I second the previous comment.

Note to Literotica: Please advise your contributors. It seems to me that you don't care!

your syntax is pashto or something similar. get a proofreader to re-work and this would have been hot!