by Otazel
Okay that is out of the way ~~ let us get to the do you want to put it in me part and really be the man of the house.! There really should be at least one more Chapter or so left in you.!**
I can think of several right off the top of my "head" if I try real "hard"..** LOL
Very good story but way to short.!
Got you a "5" though.
Thanks.
A vision like this can leave a lasting impression on a young man. Even if nothing else happens it affects his thoughts and behavior for a long time.
The wankers will really love this story but for me a few grammar and spelling errors such as "beasts" will reduce the rating to 4 stars. Could have been 5 stars with a little more attention to details.
Depending on the mother - maybe "beasts" was the appropriate word???
Great story, well written, good spacing. Going to check if you have other stories.
Makes me want to read more of this hot mother and him. Perhaps she can teach him how to eat pussy and to pleasure her like she wants to be pleasured.
He is the man of the house and he should give his woman everything she wants, including seducing her with love and affection, and become the dominant partner.
Thanks for the read.
Why would mother suddenly end the "pump and shoot into nowhere? She appeared to start out as horny as a rabbit, but after her son's handjob was complete, she seemed to have lost interest.
I suppose I was disappinted due to expecting more.
... and you captured the thrill of that really well. I don't like cross generational incest scenes but the sheer eroticism of this was almost enough to override this dislike.
Only a caring and loving mother can show so much love
For a short story, this was very good. Although I like character development, both in depth and breadth, and logical plot development, this short story was able to demonistrate an emotional and sensual attachment between mother and son.