All Comments on 'Mountain Retreat'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wow!

What a super hot story. Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Masturbation Material!

Read it, loved it, read it again and blasted a load all over my chest. Fantastic story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
I love your words...

Keep writing. You have a great way with words. Seriously, amazing. So descriptive yet concise. If you ever need an editor email me. Marcsmith4fun@gmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
good

MORE!!!!!!!

TexHubbyTexHubbyabout 10 years ago
5+ Stars!!

The story brought me in... I was Nino. I loved it... I didn't want it to end!! Please give us more of Clark and Nino and their developing love story.

TimothyMTimothyMabout 10 years ago
Absolutely amazing

It's been a long time since I've read such a teasingly hot story. And running underneath the awesome sex was the secret love that Clark has for Nino. I'm guessing the girlfriend caught on to that during the threesome, and this was the real reason for their breakup. I hope Clark is rewarded by Nino returning his affections - and by having his huge cock up his ass. Looking forward to the next chapter.

rmdennysrmdennysabout 10 years ago
smiley face

fine build to climax. i hope to read more of the their adventures. thanks for a good read.

bryan10095781bryan10095781about 10 years ago
Mountain Retreat

Excellent story and writing. Keep it up.

CuriousPeteCuriousPeteabout 10 years ago
Fun story

Really loved this tale. Building, building, building to a hot climax (pun intended). Hope you continue with more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Good story

Many guys have been in similar situations. It can be fun when buddies help each other out.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Nicely done!

Clark is a lucky dude to have Nino. So willing and wanting. I hope to see more of their adventures in love and sexual awakening.

EnjoyBothEnjoyBothover 3 years ago

I read this story a few times before but hadn't commented. I have to say, it is as hot the third time as it was the first. Glad I found it again.

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