All Comments on 'Mountain Retreat Ch. 02'

Although the Cinderela story was a little lame, the bathroom scene was very, very hot. I can't wait to read more of the adventures.

i hope more is coming soon

but the rest of the story was good, but should have been slit up into diffrent chapters and added a lot more detail.

I really enjoyed this. When I got to the "note to self" part I was taking a sip of pop and exploded in laughter. Think I almost blew up my computer when I spewed pop all over the keyboard, lol. That is a line I just love. I think I've used it in two or three of my stories; i.e. note to self, NEVER throw the phone at Master, wince. I've been watching too much of That 70's Show lately I guess. Usually I think, note to self, dumbass, DON'T try that again. I will definatly be adding your name to the list of writers I check on for new stories. Thanks for the fun. Your characters are just so interesting.

This is really hot