All Comments on 'Mountain Retreat Ch. 02'

This is really hot

I really enjoyed this. When I got to the "note to self" part I was taking a sip of pop and exploded in laughter. Think I almost blew up my computer when I spewed pop all over the keyboard, lol. That is a line I just love. I think I've used it in two or three of my stories; i.e. note to self, NEVER throw the phone at Master, wince. I've been watching too much of That 70's Show lately I guess. Usually I think, note to self, dumbass, DON'T try that again. I will definatly be adding your name to the list of writers I check on for new stories. Thanks for the fun. Your characters are just so interesting.

but the rest of the story was good, but should have been slit up into diffrent chapters and added a lot more detail.

i hope more is coming soon

Although the Cinderela story was a little lame, the bathroom scene was very, very hot. I can't wait to read more of the adventures.