All Comments on 'Move-In Day (Freshman Freaks)'

by gavinmlfletcher

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Slowine4meSlowine4mealmost 12 years ago
hott

Very hott story i hope you continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
too long to develop

not a bad ending, but you really shouldn't waste that much time describing non-sexual activity

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

I beg to differ from anon. I found the story good to read and the feelings well expressed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Real slow lead in, but very nice ending!

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