All Comments on 'Mr. Basketball Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Exceptionally awesome

Please keep the story going.

tygztygzover 10 years ago

I'm liking Teagan; I think Sam is rather unbalanced and unreasonable (Jake, be only unto me! Oh hi Justin!).... And Jake? Not sure if I like the fellow. There hope for him, but so far he's kind of set up as the superman (great looks, all the girls like him, makes them cum almost instantly) though somewhat unusually, he's not the perfect nice guy along with it, though we're not given much reason that he's kind of a dick at times, which makes it even tougher to like him.

I need to like the main characters, or at least be able to put myself in their shoes somewhat.

The story's entertaining and better than most, but still I think about a 4 (character issues).

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Outstanding

I really like the story keep it up I also like that it does

Not take months like other stories to get the next chapter

My question when is jake going to give in to sams's teasing

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More

Would like to Jake also fuck Mandy before series is over.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Great series, keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

This is one of the best series I've read on here to date. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to many more chapters.

dairetodairetoover 10 years ago
Really enjoying this story

Cant wait to see where it ends up

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Its kinda funny sad, hes a grown man but keeps lying to his cousin like a little kid.

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