All Comments on 'Mr. Peters and the Panties'

I liked it and you should run with it.

Delicious three part story, Charles...wonderful twists and turns...arousing to say the least!!

Keep it up!!

What about Alan!!!!!!

I have read a lot of the stories you wrote you mentioned a Alison Angel i thought i would see if she was real or just made up wow

from my best stories on here. Ahhh, humiliation. Write more please!

One one hand, the word "girlish" was really bugging me with it's overuse. On the other hand, excusing the ridiculous and non-believable form of discipline, the story and writing were excellent. Very different than anything I have read on here. I was very much engrossed in the story from beginning to end. It was such a tease though! I wanted him to bang one of those chics so bad the anticipation was killing me! That dude is one sick mofo if he really believes in that as a form of discipline. All in all, great story. Gave it a 5. Very unique. I was reading it at work from my iPhone in my drawer. I couldn't wait until after work to read it! On to your next one!

Absolutely ridiculous and absolutely fantastic. You took on a very tricky topic, pushed it all the way into the realm of total fantasy, and delivered a fantastic story.

The title (mine, not his) says it all!

What a mind! Kept me stiff through the whole story! Good job!