All Comments on 'Mrs. Reverend Benson'

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valh587valh587almost 14 years ago

I enjoyed the sexual content of this story, but the fact that the Reverend gets away with blaming all of his problems on his wife, and punishing her for his actions, really ruined the mood for me. I would have enjoyed it if he had received some kind of retribution as well, instead of just getting a hard on and a sick sense of entitlement.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
I liked it

Good job... very entertaining

chytownchytownalmost 14 years ago
Half Assed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

All that boring ass sex and no plot stop writing this crap!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Good story

But the plot is inadequately developed. How did Tom get Mrs. Benson into bed the first time? That section is critical.

blackgraceblackgraceover 10 years ago

This is so fucking hot!

Clarissa72Clarissa72almost 2 years ago

I will agree that there needs more development of characters/scenes. But, the plot is good and the editing is not bad. I DO NOT agree that it is crap. It just needs more details to fully understand what is going on at the beginning. Otherwise, don’t quit writing bec some1 doesn’t like it. For every 10 ppl that like the story, there will be at least 1-2 internet trolls that will dislike it. Continue to write from the your imagination not there comments. It will get better; you just have to continue writing 🌹Best of luck in your writing journey!🌹

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Terribly written.

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