by watchingyou2
I enjoyed the sexual content of this story, but the fact that the Reverend gets away with blaming all of his problems on his wife, and punishing her for his actions, really ruined the mood for me. I would have enjoyed it if he had received some kind of retribution as well, instead of just getting a hard on and a sick sense of entitlement.
All that boring ass sex and no plot stop writing this crap!!!!!!!!
But the plot is inadequately developed. How did Tom get Mrs. Benson into bed the first time? That section is critical.
I will agree that there needs more development of characters/scenes. But, the plot is good and the editing is not bad. I DO NOT agree that it is crap. It just needs more details to fully understand what is going on at the beginning. Otherwise, don’t quit writing bec some1 doesn’t like it. For every 10 ppl that like the story, there will be at least 1-2 internet trolls that will dislike it. Continue to write from the your imagination not there comments. It will get better; you just have to continue writing 🌹Best of luck in your writing journey!🌹