All Comments on 'Mrs. Watson, I Presume'

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The Erotic AvengerThe Erotic Avengerover 17 years ago
Some story

I think this story needs an ending. Time for Brian to visit Mrs. Watson and explore HER boundries. Think about it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
if mom finds out about this she kick some ass

friendship lost and ass kicking of the girlfriend.why leave him there unless there more to this.to many unanswered questions.

wmat1111wmat1111over 17 years ago
What?

You have got to be kidding. Almost killing him and then walk out leaving him tied up. What a bunch of bull shit. Get a life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
hot story

fuck the nay sayers, this was a great and super hot story. different than any i have read. mom should get taught by mrs. watson on how to fuck her son to the brink. please continue on this story line

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
The physical abuse isn't appealing to me...

...although I'm sure there's a wide audience for it.

Your stories about The Teacher Is In, and Kathy Gets a Pony I&II are my favorites by you.

However, as much as the physical abuse you seem to be more and more attracted to portray in your stories is a turnoff to me, there's no mistaking you have a great way with words and setting up scenes. I'll keep reading your stories hoping for a seduction of a reluctant male with a little more limited physical abuse. Until then, good luck with all of your submissions. I think overall you're a very talented writer, and I always look forward to seeing your name listed among the new stories submitted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Awesome

Great story! Please keep writing with these characters or at least the same theme.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
You forgot some things

I can't believe you forgot a lighted cigarette on his nipples or shoving hairpins in his urethra. How about a hot curling iron in his ass? I know, before she put the bag over his head, she could have plugged his nostrils to make his asphixiation even better. WOO HOO, it turns me on just thinking about it. I'm really sorry I read this. I just can't get into people hurting each other for sexual pleasure. It definitely did not belong in the fetish section. It was more of reluctance/non-compliance story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Law suit

She better pray that the family doesnt slap a law suit on her

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
How Cruely Absurdand Crudely Insane - Sicko Writer

She painfully abused her best friends son and left him alive to tell his mother? Almost as stupid as calling this fetish under a painfilled intention.

Oh well, under the loving march towards addiction inflick some pain on yourself as well little sick one by trying the hangnoose to heighten your jackoffs - ooops - whats this hanging around she said while inserting a pipecleaner.

Gosh this could be fun if it wasn't so sad writer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Mrs Watson is a great teacher

Loved Mrs Watson up to the point of the plastic bag. Loved her piss play. Keep her adventures rolling.

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 17 years ago
Straigt from Transilvania...

Actually, that was a horror story, I presume.

Re. my title, I prefer the original.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
outstanding

It made me cum!!! Keep it up I'm still hard for you.

FreshlyDirtyFreshlyDirtyover 17 years ago
You know who's gotta find him, PLEASE?

I don't have to say who, you already know who, She has to come in to see her boy sprawled out and let the madness ensue. PLEASE make it happen?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
incredible

THIS IS A MUST CONTINUE STORY!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
she's a bit twisted

there is this sadistic streak in her

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Beyond bad!!!

An absolutely shit story.

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 14 years ago
Hot as fuck

Dirty, hot, forbidden, and well-written. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Yes

My sort of woman

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
very hot

I loved her dialogue, the breath play was hot also.

I hope you write more

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Need more sexy stories where women use bondage and sex to seduce younger men to erupt in there pleasure. I've come hard many times from reading this. Need more please

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