by softspokenstephen
More of your great story. Love the way you have written these storyline's
You are a talented writer taking my mind to feel the sensations, situation and manipulations of Mrs Wentworth. Looking forward to relating to Mrs Wentworth in the next installment of the education of Stephen (and to a degree of Lana's).
its like rotten tomatoes if you on stage i would throw tomatoes at you you stink with a stupid story like this
very, very, very nice story :) awesome build up :) keep this work up. you got 4x 5 stars from me + fav. Cant wait for next part :*
I look forward to reading much more of it - thank you for sharing a wonderfully erotic talent with us and please have another five stars. By the way, I shouldn't bother too much about anonymous sniping.
I loved it, can't remember having read an erotic story like this (or these) on literotica!
I like this story, but when you suggest we read he others as preludes, they either need to be titled the same or somehow linked, because I don't know where to find them.
Click on the author's name and you'll be brought to a page with all his stories.
... I was pretty sure Steve's mom was going to have fun on her "business trip" from the beginning of the first installment, the phone call pretty much confirmed it. What I'm wondering is will Steve A) find out why his mom really went away and B) realize she was getting fucked while she was on the phone with him? I also have a sense that this has the potential to change categories if the author so chooses. I may have misread the signal but I sensed something decidedly non maternal coming from Steve's mom in the first installment. I'm also trying to figure out if Doris is still undecided about how far she intends to go with Steve or if she is just building tension very slowly. I think if she waits too much longer her next blow job will blow off the top of her head.
He's a bit on the slow side,need to speed things up a bit or mommy will be back from her shagging.?
Thank you everyone for your comments. It's nice to hear from readers. I know this isn't everyone's sort of story but I'm glad some like it. I'm going to keep going and am finishing up another chapter. I really look at all the feedback and it helps. I've learned a lot from some of the people who send feedback about how the female characters might be feeling and some things about what some people might wear and things like that. Some of what I write is drawn from experience but it's easier to be more realistic when people help that way. So thanks and I'll try to reply whenever I can. --Stephen
Loved reading your story and hope the next chapters follow soon.
A very nice story. I hope for more chapters to follow (and maybe an opportunity for him to really fuck Mrs. Wentworth?)
Enjoyed the slow build up ,and ready for him to finally have a nice hot fuck session with Mrs. Wentworth.
She is really messing with Stephen's poor head! Actually, both Big Stephen and Little Stephen are being tortured. You wrote your main character with much more patience than I had when I was 19 and that for certain. Good story.
I am loving this series so much and the night at the opera was an incredible chapter! I just love how Mrs. Wentworth keeps young Stevie on edge- so hot!